Jamie @ Elm Park School

Tuesday, 25 November 2014

This is my Peaceful communities slide that I did with Reece and Zion

This is a video of RM 21 learning to play the Ukulele with Mrs Taljiard.

Peace Poem Reflection

I am learning to write a Poem about Peace One Day using my senses.

I am so proud of being able to use good adjectives to describe what I am writing about in my poem.

It can be tricky to find descriptive and interesting words to use in my sentences.

My buddy can help me by giving me some ideas.

The next step for me in my learning is to write a poem with more lines.

I am learning to write an interesting recount.

I am so proud of making my recount interesting by using similes and adjectives.

It can be tricky to find the best similes to use in this story.

My Teacher can help me by spell checking my story.

The next step for me in my learning is to write an even better recount.